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A Journey... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Walking towards the shadows Turning away from the light Looking for friendly faces Yet nothing is in my sight All the roads seem so gloomy Feeling so alone within my heart Bending down to smell the roses Hoping for a fresh new start But the roses are blackened The sweet smell forever gone My heart begins to race For I dont think I belong Sounds of crying is all around me The faces I can not see Lonely souls of others Is this what I will be? I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this..I was thinking about this subject the other day..sometimes thru no choice of our own we find ourselves in a dark and lonely place but at some point we will make a choice as to how long we will stay there. I recently came to the decision that I didn't belong in a lonely place anymore...and I will let go of my sadness and go on....this is not just a choice but a journey that I now have begun. James |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
James, I am so happy for you that you have begun your journey out of the loneliness. It is a struggle that many people in the light dont realize. I have tried the journey many times, yet my memories wont let go of me that easily. Inwhich I know someday I shall be st free from the past pain. Thanx I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Ah my friend Dark: First of all this is verrrry gooood . Second, my friend, Turn around Your walking in the wrong direction. Face the sun and the shadows will fall behind, And what do we care what's behind. I know it's the law you must have a rear view mirror, but no body said you had to use it. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Very sad poem, I think we all take that lonely path at some stage, some for a longer period than others. Take Joel's advice it's well said  Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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