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Stains Of You |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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~Stains Of You~ In the night in the cold smokey breath escapes my swollen mouth seeping redness busted lips torn from a haven safety shattered glass crashing echos feet bare and blistering street lights glowing... shining their gleam across stains of you... stains on me. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
The stains go far deeper than people know. I like this. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ouch!... powerful piece, SpitFire. I like this one alot. Michael |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the stains remind me of scars, and this was very moving. good work Kathleen |
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