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dhuron
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0 posted 2000-04-19 09:03 PM


Tired, worn from the Day
Lying half awake upon the bed
Hearing the music from the Ocean
The Rhythmic crashing of Waves

Drifting into Sleep, soothed by the Ocean
The Mind goes on a Journey...

Rushing of water, the smell  of the air
The Beauty of the Waterfall Pouring into the
Crystal Blue lake below.  Perfection at hand,
Untouched by Humans, left in its remarkable Splendor

Closing my eyes, taking in the soothing air
All goes quiet for a brief instant, A faint Song
The inhabitants of the lake sing with Majestic Beauty
Drawn to the Siren Song of the Lake, hypnotized Fading away

Raindrops falling on my body, Slowly opening my eyes
No longer at the Enchanting Waterfall, but in a Valley
The Faint rain grows in intensity, falling faster upon me
The Sensual Smell of the Rain, overcomes my senses

Finding shelter under a tree, watching Nature’s production
Gray Clouds pouring their Tears on the Green land
Thunderous Cries filling the sky, sending chills up my spine
Sparks of Fury Striking the Ground, Dancing in the sky

Such Precision, Thunder Lighting Rain
A glorious gift, clouds growing Darker
Sparks growing, Cries screaming louder
Sitting, watching the clouds pour their soul on the ground

Running out into the Production, Rain covering myself
Lighting Flickering all around me, hearing the sizzling
As it touches the Rain, Thundering Welcoming me
Closing eyes, feeling the rain...fading away

The Moon shining Down, No longer under the rain
but on the Beach at night.  The Waves swaying, Moon Providing
the Light and the wonderful music of dolphins completing
The ocean’s production of the night.

Calling out for me, walking into the ocean
Feeling, finally feeling the splendor of these waters
Diving underwater, swimming with the aquatic creatures
Riding with the Dolphins to the Depths of this Mysterious Ocean

Taken to a new level, the majestic beauty
The unseen beauty of the aquatic world
Colors vividly expressed throughout this
Perfect representation of art, nature’s Hidden painting

Further down, into the Ocean, I am taken.
Led by a pack of Dolphins, hearing their wondrous song
Peace, Never found on the ground, but pouring in the waters
Submerged in Peaceful waters, seeing the truth.
The Truth within the mystery of the ocean, closer to the Radiating Light
Further down they take me, into the heart of the ocean....

Awakened from the slumber,
Refreshed and calm
Hearing the ocean outside
Smiling and remembering


 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


© Copyright 2000 Daniel Huron - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
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1 posted 2000-04-19 09:35 PM


God my friend you have out done yourself.
I can't describe this, any  feeble attempt would be unworthy.
I do mean that.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
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2 posted 2000-04-19 09:42 PM


Thank You so much Joel.  Coming from such a wonderful poet as yourself is a Real Honor.  I am speechless...Thanks


Daniel

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Sophia
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3 posted 2000-04-20 09:46 AM


“Such Precision, Thunder Lighting Rain
A glorious gift, clouds growing Darker
Sparks growing, Cries screaming louder
Sitting, watching the clouds pour their soul on the ground”
Astonishing! You took me so deep into your writing I was lost in my minds eye. You write magnificently and I hope to read more of your posts  

Michael
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4 posted 2000-04-20 09:49 AM


You know I am a lover of the ocean.  I tell you, this poem mesmerized me.  Beautiful imagery, dhuron.  I was right there with you and the dolphins.  Exquisite poem.  


Michael

dhuron
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5 posted 2000-04-20 08:09 PM


Sophia, Thank you so much for the really kind words.  I am glad you liked this piece, I also did a "wind" poem called "Sensual Winds" if it might intreast you.  Thanks Again.


Michael, coming from you that is over whelming.  Thanks!!



tracie66
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6 posted 2000-04-20 11:49 PM


d~
WOW...next time you take this journey make sure you come and take my soul along for the journey with yours. This was very visual and I just loved it.
Tracie~  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


SEA
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7 posted 2000-04-21 02:36 AM


Dhuron~ everything you wrote of touches my heart to the core.... you wrote of things I love most....I was right there......LOVED THIS!! -SEA
dhuron
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8 posted 2000-04-21 03:18 PM


Wow..

Thank you two.  SO very glad ya'll liked it.


Daniel

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Irish Rose
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9 posted 2000-04-22 08:53 PM


I will take this one with me when I see it for the first time...the ocean..is it really as beautiful as this??
I will find out in 2 weeks!!

 Kathleen


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