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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Tired, worn from the Day Lying half awake upon the bed Hearing the music from the Ocean The Rhythmic crashing of Waves Drifting into Sleep, soothed by the Ocean The Mind goes on a Journey... Rushing of water, the smell of the air The Beauty of the Waterfall Pouring into the Crystal Blue lake below. Perfection at hand, Untouched by Humans, left in its remarkable Splendor Closing my eyes, taking in the soothing air All goes quiet for a brief instant, A faint Song The inhabitants of the lake sing with Majestic Beauty Drawn to the Siren Song of the Lake, hypnotized Fading away Raindrops falling on my body, Slowly opening my eyes No longer at the Enchanting Waterfall, but in a Valley The Faint rain grows in intensity, falling faster upon me The Sensual Smell of the Rain, overcomes my senses Finding shelter under a tree, watching Nature’s production Gray Clouds pouring their Tears on the Green land Thunderous Cries filling the sky, sending chills up my spine Sparks of Fury Striking the Ground, Dancing in the sky Such Precision, Thunder Lighting Rain A glorious gift, clouds growing Darker Sparks growing, Cries screaming louder Sitting, watching the clouds pour their soul on the ground Running out into the Production, Rain covering myself Lighting Flickering all around me, hearing the sizzling As it touches the Rain, Thundering Welcoming me Closing eyes, feeling the rain...fading away The Moon shining Down, No longer under the rain but on the Beach at night. The Waves swaying, Moon Providing the Light and the wonderful music of dolphins completing The ocean’s production of the night. Calling out for me, walking into the ocean Feeling, finally feeling the splendor of these waters Diving underwater, swimming with the aquatic creatures Riding with the Dolphins to the Depths of this Mysterious Ocean Taken to a new level, the majestic beauty The unseen beauty of the aquatic world Colors vividly expressed throughout this Perfect representation of art, nature’s Hidden painting Further down, into the Ocean, I am taken. Led by a pack of Dolphins, hearing their wondrous song Peace, Never found on the ground, but pouring in the waters Submerged in Peaceful waters, seeing the truth. The Truth within the mystery of the ocean, closer to the Radiating Light Further down they take me, into the heart of the ocean.... Awakened from the slumber, Refreshed and calm Hearing the ocean outside Smiling and remembering The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God my friend you have out done yourself. I can't describe this, any feeble attempt would be unworthy. I do mean that. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Thank You so much Joel. Coming from such a wonderful poet as yourself is a Real Honor. I am speechless...Thanks Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Sophia New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 1 |
“Such Precision, Thunder Lighting Rain A glorious gift, clouds growing Darker Sparks growing, Cries screaming louder Sitting, watching the clouds pour their soul on the ground” Astonishing! You took me so deep into your writing I was lost in my minds eye. You write magnificently and I hope to read more of your posts  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You know I am a lover of the ocean. I tell you, this poem mesmerized me. Beautiful imagery, dhuron. I was right there with you and the dolphins. Exquisite poem. Michael |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Sophia, Thank you so much for the really kind words. I am glad you liked this piece, I also did a "wind" poem called "Sensual Winds" if it might intreast you. Thanks Again. Michael, coming from you that is over whelming. Thanks!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
d~ WOW...next time you take this journey make sure you come and take my soul along for the journey with yours. This was very visual and I just loved it. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dhuron~ everything you wrote of touches my heart to the core.... you wrote of things I love most....I was right there......LOVED THIS!!  -SEA |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wow.. Thank you two. SO very glad ya'll liked it. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I will take this one with me when I see it for the first time...the ocean..is it really as beautiful as this?? I will find out in 2 weeks!! Kathleen |
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