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The light I see |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Stumbling through a sunny day Waiting to relax the fake expressions on my face These are the prices i pay Heaven sent penalties thoughtfully given for having faith If a best friend is always there Then I just reunited with depression As well as Dispair Fully rested from a peaceful remission Give me solace its the ultimate fix Put my mind at rest I will dig out of my pit Or maybe this is all for the best I am locked in myself And i should have swallowed the key I am trapped with no help Lost completely in me No hope, no light, everything just swell nothing to contrast with my dim soul other than the light of hell The one thing that keeps me from being cold |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
xEmperor, This is painfully wonderful work. Feelings and pain pouring from this as a waterfall to a lake. "The light of hell, The one thing that keeps me from being cold" that is a very Powerful statement, Hope all this changes in time. dhuron The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Hey Ember, Wonderful poem... written very well... I hope you feel better soon... and remember... you'll always have me.  "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
No hope, no light, everything just swell nothing to contrast with my dim soul other than the light of hell The one thing that keeps me from being cold I feel this light of hell now and it does keep me warm. Good works here. Thanks for the read. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The light from 2000. So I guess you've been posting for quite sometime. And its very dark indeed. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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