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On life... **dedicated**
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On life... **dedicated** |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
This is something I wrote for a friend of mine who I don't see much...and may not either... Purva... this is for you...wanted to write something for you cause I may not be around but...I would want you to remember this... ON LIFE... Life’s unfair and realistically lonely. It’s difficult and it takes that little extra of something or maybe a little bit of everything to live it with enthusiasm. Life’s an uphill that you just keep trudging and it’s such a relief to know that when you look back someone’s watching and waiting for you to reach the top. It doesn’t matter how long it takes but just the fact the when you reach there, someone’s going to be more proud than yourself and that your not going to be alone is all you need. Life’s like a dream with a big share of reality in it... So dream all you want but if you ever want them to come true remember it’s gonna take a lot of hard work, pain, effort, hope and faith in yourself and it’s gonna take “YOU”. Accept the challenge, the more you advance you’ll find your steps getting heavier. Sometimes you’ll figure you just can’t go on and you may decided to turn back, before which you might just want to close your eyes and you’ll find me right there, you’ll feel my hand right on your shoulder. I wasn’t going to leave you alone...I’m right here to lift your spirits or to push you in the right direction or maybe just to listen. So walk your road and don’t forget you’re being watched...every step of the way and someone’s always cheering for you... Just keep going your distance and smile like always. Gather all the star light...keep shining...and when you finally get there...you’ll see not only was it worth it but you wouldn’t want it any other way... I wish you noting less than the very best! < !signature--> If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Your Friend is very Lucky Avanti. THis poem is so nice and what a perfect gift to give someone than a poem. Great Job Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thanx dhuron... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A true friend you are Avanti. A beautiful poem  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Words of wisdom for a beloved friend, wonderful Avanti. But hon, are you ok? If you need to talk email me please. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Avanti, this is a wondeful dedication and a powerful statement of your friendship and loyalty. Obvioulsy there is something deep going on between you and this friend...hopefully they will see the wisdom of your words and follow your lead. excellent writing. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Friendship, what better word? this is very touching. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Avanti~ to have a friend like you, that's what we all want. This is beautiful.  -SEA |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thank you all for reading munda...you liked it i'm ((((((hug))))))I'm fine Isis nothing wrong honest... thanx for always asking... thanx Janet...just wanted to write something for my friend so i did. glad you liked it Joel the wolf...glad you liked it... wanted to tell you i love your signature and SEA you make me feel good about myself.. thank you all If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thank you all for reading munda...you liked it i'm ((((((hug))))))I'm fine Isis nothing wrong honest... thanx for always asking... thanx Janet...just wanted to write something for my friend so i did. glad you liked it Joel the wolf...glad you liked it... wanted to tell you i love your signature and SEA you make me feel good about myself.. thank you all If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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