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All My Fault |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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ALL MY FAULT < !signature-->Tell me it's all my fault, I really need the blame. Cast all your guilt on me, Please, brand me with the shame Cast my bleeding heart salt, God, how I love the sting. I need this fervently, Yeah, another wasted ring. No attention to truth, Na, gut wrench me with lies. Oh to be browbeaten By that look upon your eyes. The torment of my youth Holds not a light to this, A brain slowly eaten By the worms of loving bliss. Sure as Sanity crashes, To that Reality train. Life, come to a screeching halt, Throws all dream to the flame. But I'll sit and sift the ashes For all Love I know is pain. Yeah, please just tell me it's my fault, You know I really need the blame. Michael Anderson For all behind was dark and drear, And all before was night and fear. How many hours of night or day In those suspended pangs I lay, I could not tell; I scarcely knew If this were human breath I drew. Lord Byron [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I wouldn't blame you for anything!!! Kathleen |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
We do try to carry chains, don't we. nice Michael. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh michael. just keep hanging on to that piece of light in your lap. just so you know, finding the blame lessens none the pain. *****kynder quote: |
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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
Gotta go with kynder on this one. Though she put it better than my ramblings would have. The scars may disappear, but the pain is always lingering somewhere close by. |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
sometimes we need to hear that its our fault, because that way we feel we can fix it somehow...but all that is really is a never ending cycle of pain. Wonderful poem  take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ROFLMAO!!! Ahem! I guess I take this differently than the others here! Of course it's your fault Mike! DUH!!! ROFLMAO still!!! THis rocks Mike, LOVE the sardonic humor! |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Maybe it's no one's fault... maybe it's fate. Loved the poem, Michael. |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
I often go out of my way to have this finger of blame pointed at me. It's a feeling I'd gladly put above the other. Loved this! helena |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing Michael...but you can only take half the blame and half the hurt. James |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
god one Michael but you know sometimes it's nobody's fault just nobody... take care If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
God I know the feeling!!!!!!!!!! Great poem m'dear. |
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Shandelier Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22Canada |
Feeling of guilt are natural, but that doesnt mean you're to blame. Great Poem! Shandelier |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Joel, Indeed - I think I am a magnet for those steel chains...LOL Satiate, Smile, I love you! kynder, So true, maybe that's why I don't mind it landing on me... kinda let's me feel important...LOL kittyj, Indeed, the pain NEVER goes away. Broken Wings, something are irrepairanle by nature me thinks.  Christopher, You sadist!! How dare you come in here and laugh at me!! Just kidding bro, I knew you'd appreciate this for what it really was...LOL Hey, kick me once more - I NEED the abuse!!! Hope, tears, and renewal, 'Tis Fate, indeed, but then Fate has never been a friend to me. James, why take 1/2 when you can have it all, besides no one else seems to want any. HelenaJ, Amen. AVANTI, it's always someone's fault. Usually the responsible party refuses to step up is all. X-Angel, I know you can relate. Where've you been anyway... I missed you. Thank you all for the gracious replies. Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Well....this was either written for me, or for Sondra! Either way, it rocks, and I KNOW it's my fault, so feel better, will ya? Getting something through your head is like inserting needles into steel! Argh! They just freakin' bend!! I'm laughing here, because I don't think you hate me, you're just venting. I'm ok with venting...really.  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
ROFL... You been trying to get something through to me, Gen? Indeed, I was just venting here...LOL and you know I could never hate you... Jeeze, though, did you have to use the 'S' word here?Michael |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Arrrr! There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Why is it anyone's fault? Blame on it fate. It's fate's fault A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Michael~ I can relate, yep give it to me one more time because it's always my fault regardless. So I keep on accepting that. Michael you've got a beautiful soul and we love you for it. Tracie~< !signature--> Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Michael~ Ummm you sound like me when I'm PMSing, although I don't think you get PMS!!(LOL) This is great.... I sooooo know these feelings....Great one.-SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 MichaelBlame it on the Bossa Nova~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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