Dark Poetry #1 |
Here With Me |
Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
~~~ Oke, oke, so it's not dark but I still wanted to share it with you guys. So enjoy! Or don't...lol..but I hope you will. ~~~ Small rays of sunlight shine in through the blinds A hazy glow settling in the room, weighing in the laziness of the day There's no where else I'd rather be than lying here close to you, in our silken kingdom of pillows and sheets Gentle silence washing over us, growing louder as your hands explore the length of my skin I could spend forever here and never wish to leave I'll be completely satisfied as long as you're here with me "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What a wonderful place to be. I would never want to leave either. Beautiful, soft words. Thanks for sharing. Michael |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sounds good to me. I mean that. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you both very much for your replies. "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Kurly Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48 |
Nice poem, I wish I had that! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
There's not much else to say. A splendid write. *grins* I really enjoyed this one. You took a subject that could easily have been turned raunchy, annoying, of misshandled into something beautiful. A wonderful write, as usual. ~ Mon Verite "Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter" |
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