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eegood
Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 2000-04-18 01:06 PM


PRAYING FOR A RAINBOW

you look at me with furious eyes,
like storm cLouds--dark and ominous.

Lighting flashes across your face
and your words are like thunder;
crashing through my mind,
rumbling through my soul--

The rain is pouring down my face,
damp pain is seeping through
to my fragile, aching core.

I kneel in awkward silence,
stangled by the bleakness,
suffocated by the gloom--
Praying for a rainbow.

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-04-18 09:11 PM


I'll join you, with clasped hands we'll pray together.
Wonderful work  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
2 posted 2000-04-18 11:06 PM


You describe this feeling perfectly!Hope you see your rainbow soon!

helena

 The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere.
Mute.
Made dumb by my own thoughts.
Tonguetied and awkward.
Tripping over my own voice.
A pen and paper for my voice.

HelenaJ

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-19 01:33 AM


As old as I am can I stand up to do that to?
this is a good one.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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