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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Sometimes all I ever do is just stand there, Blank smile. Sit there and watch while hearts break, Tears fall. Every time I try to help or open up, Won't work, I just close up tighter than ever before. My tears, They fall too, just not as much, Hide them, For fear that others may see through. Blank smile. There I go again i fear, Lost it. I tried to open up again, tried to help. To much, So much to deal with, scares me so. Hope lives. Yet I can't find it for too long, Close eyes. And fly back to the stars again. Back soon. Maybe this time it's for good. Hope so.... All I can do is hope right now. |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Well your chip off my block! This facade gets to be so exhausting don't it! Somehow I lost that blank smile though there are days it would sure come in handy. It 's a lot harder to hide your heart when it's on your sleeve! helena |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Well I hope your back soon to. This is wonderful, A different format. short words of expressions To the point. Great. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
you have hope you have tears. soon comes the renewal. from faith comes it all. hang on hon. love comes from this one. *****kynder quote: |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
This was rather close to my own existance, I relate well. nice poem There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
ohh this one really got to me...i have lived many days with a blank smile, but these past couple of weeks i've said..the hek with it....so now i have a plain face...and the roof is falling on me...oh well enough about me...just a peak as how deep you went on this one with me  dont worry hope will guide the way. *HUG*take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Dark Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18Oviedo, FL, USA |
Blank smiles...I never thought of it that way. So you too have found yourself forcing yourself to laugh...to smile...to do anything besides breath? I have been down that road...it is a long one at that! I hope things get bettter for you... "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi |
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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
There is hope on the inside of every tear drop. Sometimes you need to cry an ocean of tears to find a glimmer, but it is always there. And it is there for everyone, even you and me. No blank smiles here. |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Thank you, all. good to know I'm not alone. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hope i feel the same way too hon, you are not alone indeed. I keep telling others to hope, to try a little more, I am their touchstone as it were, yet I still feel alone, and wonder who would REALLY be there for me??? And the worst of it, it feels selfish and wrong to feel this way?????? Touchy subject really, well written A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
Great Job!! I know what this feels like...society would like to have you keep the blank smile but i say to hell with it. Great poem. <3 shadow Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Poem, it all has been said. So true in each of the replies. We all can relate to an extent. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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