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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-04-17 06:40 AM


Blind love is a love that only one person does see
Blind love never lets your emotions be free

Twisting, turning, wrapping you inside out
You're not quite sure what it's all about

Blind love hurts you, aches you and rips you apart
Killing your heart slowly from the very start

Relentless, fearless always driven
This is blind love, only one love given


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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1 posted 2000-04-17 08:29 AM


yes, it is relentless....and yes all of this.....so true

 Kathleen


Joel the wolf
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Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-17 11:04 AM


God the ring of truth, does hurt my ears.
love this.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
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Biloxi MS
3 posted 2000-04-17 01:00 PM


Wow you just described my last heartache in such detail, blind love,only one love given.
Great stuff Tracie

dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

4 posted 2000-04-17 04:18 PM


I agree with everyone else.  Great work!!
  

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-04-20 05:13 AM


Irish Rose~
When it's happening it's so terrible you don't realise at first and when you do you just feel so hurt and crushed inside.
Blind love's a killer of the heart and soul.

Joel~
Sorry this rings truth to you, but I'm so glad you took the time to read this.

NamelessOne~
Sorry I've desribed something that you have endured hope you are moving on from that..
thanks for reading.

d~
thanks for taking the time to read and post a reply to this, I'm glad you liked it  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Michael
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6 posted 2000-04-20 09:57 AM


Love is blind - but I'm the lovin' kind...
Good poem Tracie, to say I elate would be a HUGE understatement.


Michael

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-04-20 07:38 PM


Indeed Tracey, blind is love and often cos of that you overlook the bitter or hidden truth.  And no one ever promised it was meant to be easy.. and it ain't!!  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
8 posted 2000-04-21 10:47 AM


Michael~
Your reply brought a HUGE   to my face thanks    

Isis~
Words so true, thanks for your reply  



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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