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Dark Poetry #1

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kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-04-17 03:32 AM

Cursed moon.
Used to bathe in the light,
Bask in the glow.
My eyes, up they lift,
Only now to see that shining face
Laughing at me.
Teasing me with its soft comfort,
Knowing no lover and I shall roll
And dance in lunar ecstasty,
Sanity incredibly.
I stand solitare beneath rays
That bring burns eyes can't see.
Remembering when someone shared this
Pain with me.
We would lick each other's wounds,
Bearing bandadges, rise up to
Bravely face yet another night.
Profane moon.
Sticking shafts of light in
My memories of plight.

*****kynder

quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-04-17 03:38 AM

A great ending:
Sticking shafts of light in
My memories of plight
I can't count how many nights I've howled at the lonely moon.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

2 posted 2000-04-17 03:49 AM

Sanity incredibily...burns eyes can`t see
Kynder you`ve got it goin on girl
and the ending with such sweet pain...thank you for the thrill

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2000-04-17 06:33 AM

Great title~ Great poem~ Great writer~
Well written
Tracie~

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Hope, tears, and renewal
Member

since 2000-03-27

Posts 74

4 posted 2000-04-17 09:00 PM

Beautiful poem, kynder. All your writing is awesome. ~We really can't trust the moon~

HelenaJ
Member

since 2000-04-04

Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada

5 posted 2000-04-17 10:12 PM

Kynder this was amazing! If you like i will help you to block the moon so that it may never pain you eyes and soul again. We must unite!

helena

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