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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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Cursed moon. Used to bathe in the light, Bask in the glow. My eyes, up they lift, Only now to see that shining face Laughing at me. Teasing me with its soft comfort, Knowing no lover and I shall roll And dance in lunar ecstasty, Sanity incredibly. I stand solitare beneath rays That bring burns eyes can't see. Remembering when someone shared this Pain with me. We would lick each other's wounds, Bearing bandadges, rise up to Bravely face yet another night. Profane moon. Sticking shafts of light in My memories of plight. *****kynder quote: |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
A great ending: Sticking shafts of light in My memories of plight I can't count how many nights I've howled at the lonely moon. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Sanity incredibily...burns eyes can`t see Kynder you`ve got it goin on girl and the ending with such sweet pain...thank you for the thrill |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Great title~ Great poem~ Great writer~ Well written Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Beautiful poem, kynder. All your writing is awesome. ~We really can't trust the moon~ |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Kynder this was amazing! If you like i will help you to block the moon so that it may never pain you eyes and soul again. We must unite! helena |
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