Dark Poetry #1 |
Mania |
NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Mania Transfixed by the momentum of infatuation powerless to break the bonds held fast to the yardarm straining to tighten the shackles Gravity couldn`t hold a candle to the power you have over me not of this earth or any other orb no hope to be free The moon moves the oceans as your beauty moves my heart feeling the tidal surge of something larger whole not a part Nature can`t be turned to satisfy the needs of mortal men the mother in her fury liberties defiant she defends allowing sane such men glimpses at creatures untamed knowing full well the vision brings madness to those not worthy to attain But if a choice must be made to be carried away by the dementia or live your days with no clue to the nature of want let mania rule |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This is great, I can't begin to say. It hit my nerves, my heart, and my soul. To me this is a mournful howl. and a great expression. Joel.. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
I shiver at the thought of someone having so much control over ones soul but it is an awesome rush. Excellent Poem! take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
You have physically moved me. When the chills have subsided I will read it again. Truely exquisite. With men like you and joel around, the female race is sure to be in trouble! Helena The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere. Mute. Made dumb by my own thoughts. Tonguetied and awkward. Tripping over my own voice. A pen and paper for my voice. HelenaJ |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh friend. i hate it when this happens. but at the same time, so fresh so new. what is one to do.... reality or pretend? which do you choose? *****kynder quote: |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
thank you Joel for that soulful howl Broken Wings ,my thanks Helenaj hehe so glad i could send you a chill and Kynder when reality is no where to be found i say do the best you can... thank you K |
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