Dark Poetry #1 |
Stuff (kinda light) |
NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
This isn`t dark but you know, i feel more at home here so here goes... Stuff Beautiful, bright rainbow light like the sun on the water and the smell of a rose the sounds of the morning cool sand between your toes that first sip of wine how you felt as a child,waking up on saturday and realizing there was no school a hot summer day and you just dove in the pool singing in time to your favorite song being with your family,feeling you belong a babies hand that squeezes your finger a lover`s scent that seems to linger when someone says i love you and you say i love you too the color porsche red and my favorite...ocean blue rain on your tongue and the sound crystal makes the smell of sunday school and the bread your grandma bakes the laughter of a child and you when you smile. |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
This poem is just really cool, Nameless! I got this feeling of calm and euphoria while reading it, your words just brought me to every image. Love it. Keep up the great work! sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This reminds me of one I did, called "What I'd miss". I'll post it soon. But in this dark this is a good light. We need to peak out every now and then. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nameless~ I do so love this! Very nice and heart warming! -SEA |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
what a blessing to be able to write kinda light and kinda dark. hope you are able to post soon. miss your work!!!! *****kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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