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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476


0 posted 2000-04-14 09:07 PM


Staggering through the Darkness
Soul Dimming, overwhelmed with bleeding scars
Life’s Aura fading, falling into Damnation
The fire within the eyes receding

The Wavering Beacon Fades Away
Losing it’s bearing in the sea of Pain
Resurfacing Feelings of futility and hatred
Demons of hell attacking ruthlessly

Weary: Heart and Soul Broken
Slipping, Drowning in the Pool of Evil
Fallen, Silence, Loss of Hope
Surrendering; Giving Up

Drifting further away, Lines severed
My Beacon is Losing
With My entire Being, I try to save
Save the beacon, slipping from my Grasp, falling

Summoning every ounce of Strength from my Heart and Soul
Surrounded with an Aura of Pure Emotion and Feeling, Grabbing hold
Memories of Pleasant and Happy times fill my Being
Determined, I will not let Darkness to Capture the Beacon

Slipping from my Fingers like Sand
Calling out to the Light, Calling out
Tears Pouring from my Soul
Shouting across the barriers of Time, Space, Realities
Calling to the Hearts and Souls
Give me the Strength, Begging all that hear
Heed My Call, Help Me
Give me the Strength to save
My Beacon, My Friend


 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


© Copyright 2000 Daniel Huron - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-14 09:29 PM


Feeling the loss, ?? of your self.
The calling to a friend is hard, weather it be our other selves, or someone we know.
Strong. Moving, take my paw.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-04-15 12:12 PM


i hear your cry.  and know this... it takes but one flame to light an entire room. what a creation this is.  what a true friend you must be to give so much, the heart and soul.

*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-04-15 01:00 AM


Daniel hon, this was absolutely wonderful!  
I will lend your beacon some back up batteries from mine, hon.  From one who understands just how scary it is when the light dimms......  *hugs*


 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2000-04-15 06:40 AM


dh~
Take a little light and stregth from me, I'm here.
Your poem was full of sadness and emotion.
Tracie~



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

5 posted 2000-04-17 08:45 PM


Thanks everyone.  This poem was written for my friend...he has helped me so much and I see him in pain and feel like I can't help...thus My calling out for help and strength.....


but thank you all so much for the support

HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
6 posted 2000-04-17 08:51 PM


What ever strength i have, It is yours for the taking. You sound to be the perfect friend. your compassion is seen through your writing. It is truely wonderful!

helena

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