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ShadowHeart
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since 2000-03-25
Posts 49


0 posted 2000-04-12 05:06 PM


When I'm apart from you,
my heart starts to break.
When I awake from my dreams of you,
my heart starts to break.

I've given my heart to you,
Will you ever love me back?
I've given my life to you,
Will you ever give it back?

Now I've realized that we're only friends,
But it hurts so much.
You've told me that you'll be my friend til the end,
But it still hurts so much.

You'll never love me the way I love you,
Because we're only friends.
You'll never care for me the way I care for you,
Because we're only friends.

And it hurts me so, so much.


 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

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with you
1 posted 2000-04-12 05:56 PM


ShadowHeart~ I know EXACTLY how this feels... once upon a time...... this was me.-SEA
ShadowHeart
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since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

2 posted 2000-04-12 06:20 PM


Thanx again Sea!  I'm sorry that you know what this is like, but I'm glad that someone knows what it is too.  

<3 shadow


 Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength.


Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-12 08:05 PM


Shadowheart:  I’ve also been down this long and lonely road before it is no fun. It fills my heart with to much.
But thank you.
Joel.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-04-15 06:27 AM


I don't totally understand why it takes us so long to figure out that the other person only wants to be friends...I suppose the stronger the desire to want more from them the less likely we are to embrace the truth.  Nothing wrong with being friends if thats what both want...but if one wants more than the other...look out heart.  Oh yeah..it only took me about five years to figure out someone only wanted to be friends.  James
HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
5 posted 2000-04-15 10:51 AM


A pain I know far too well. It does pass and I suppose there is a comfort in knowing you'll feel it all again. Keep on loving!
NamelessOne
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
6 posted 2000-04-16 06:18 AM


ShadowHeart,
the pain i hear in your words brings back many memories ,for me to tell you that this experience will make you stronger is something i hope you will see in time.
Excellent job of conveying your feelings,i enjoyed it.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

7 posted 2000-04-16 01:01 PM


yes, it is a most painful piece to read, and what is more painful is when you want to return to a friendship and you find that you did not even have that. it takes courage to write words like this.

 Kathleen


Dark Usagi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18
Oviedo, FL, USA
8 posted 2000-04-16 09:32 PM


I know what you feel only too much...but it's better to know what they feel then to not know what they feel...

 "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2000-04-16 11:06 PM


I too have been in this boat, believe me!
My philosophy on it, at least you CAN love them as a friend, a little is better than none at all.  It hurts but it does work out eventually... *hugs*  P.S.  If you want to talk you know where to email me  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

10 posted 2000-04-17 08:37 PM


I think everyone has been in this boat. It SUCKs it really does, so painful and hurting...but it'll get better and fade in time
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