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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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She has unending supply of Their constant demand. It shines bright like evil Diamond light. No matter where, They always know. Can smell it on her bones. Like water, they crave it. Beggin' to enter, Open sesame? Wheat? Rye? Plain? They always surpass her shallow soothing waters, Jump feet first in her deep, enveloping end. This poor girl. Tired of all these laps, Wishin' she could just wade.... ...look at the curvaceous coral reefs, Marvel at the rainbow of creatures beneath, Childlike wonder, Playing with glee. But, no. These fiends salivate for more, Drooling for depths no man could have dared Go before. Fools. Little do they know. So many soft,delicate treasures in Her waters low. Hidden entrances to caves that require a Pace oh, so slow. Deep, warm & comforting, Revealing heights never known. Hers is a heavy road to hoe. Destined, it would seem, to be pursued by Those who only need, Those addicted to the high they hope She just might feed. Knocks on her door, Phone calls at 3 a.m., Afternoon delight so sickeningly sweet, "C'mon baby, you know you want some company." *****kynder quote: |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
oh yes, you bear your soul so well.Simply stunning ,i`ll never look at the deep end of the pool the same again. Seriously though, i don`t know what to say ,words aren`t enough i liked it so much.Thanks for sharing NamelessOne D  |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
I really like this one. Gives insight to the way others look at themselves. sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Mixing the water, tide pools, coral reefs, into and around the soul, body, mind. Depths unknown. Well I for one man want a snorkel. This is excellent A great howwwlller. Joel. Thank you. PS and thank you for your note on "Beating the Heart" I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
good work... thanyou for sharing If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Very Good Work! Thanks for posting |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Great work. Thank for giving sympathy to the someone more than often precieved as the bad guy. There should be a certain amount of that given to that whole culture. |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Great work. Thank for giving sympathy to the someone more than often precieved as the bad guy. There should be a certain amount of that given to that whole culture. |
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