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Dusty Eyes |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Staring into deep pools of magnetic thunder, these are your eyes. Being the supposed "windows to the soul", I try to crawl though. But your windows are shuttered. Broken panes of glass, dusty with tears. Someone drew pictures, pushing the dust away, enough for me to peek through... "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
cool visualizations ,i liked this one a lot |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I love eyes and indeed they are the window to the soul, if you look, you can see their true heart, their spirit. *Namaste* A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Coolish! I loved the descriptions in this. So vivid. Ggggreaat job!  Joy |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
My White Dove had been married before, and had shutters put on her eyes now. Very graphic. I can see the dust. Great. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Nameless: I'm glad you like it! Isis: True, but look deep enough, and you'll find the unexpected. Thanks. JOY: Thanks! Joel: Thank you, I believe that we all have shuttered eyes, but love is always enough to look past them. Smile. Thanks again everyone, sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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