Dark Poetry #1 |
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Dark Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18Oviedo, FL, USA |
Turning the world inside out to reach your heart I expose a kindrd spirit that seems to want to hide This being swears upon the ground I stand on that they shall renforce that law that holds me to death Forever more I shall never look back No second chances...is all I hear...those words haunt me like an ax on murders ear Loving the world in such pain...who is called to blame? Those who have lost their lives to such a fate are insisting that the shawdows of my mind are in haste Like a faded star in the night I can still see the outline of your soul The moon puts all to shame and is never left in pain I shall mend with those who imprison me...Forever more I shall never have them as friends... "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
wow this was so intense and sad kinda took me and wouldnt let go well written Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
This is a great poem...it got me thinking of the opinions I hold to certain things.. Very deep. Good work. sKiTtLeS~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
"Like a faded star in the night I can still see the outline of your soul" As do I my friend, as do I. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Exposing snippets of the soul, I like that and I liked this!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very intense and meaningful for myself and I'm sure all. Very meaningful. Kathleen |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i know how it feels to be trapped. i hear a prisoner talking here, longing to be free. keep your head up, they slip every now & then. then you can run. please post more!!!!! it's so lovely to read. *****kynder |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Konnichiwa, Dark Usa-chan. Good luck admitting to yourself your true feelings. ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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