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Dark Usagi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18
Oviedo, FL, USA

0 posted 2000-04-13 08:22 AM



Turning the world inside out to reach your heart

I expose a kindrd spirit that seems to want to hide

This being swears upon the ground I stand on that they shall renforce that law that holds me to death

Forever more I shall never look back

No second chances...is all I hear...those words haunt me like an ax on murders ear

Loving the world in such pain...who is called to blame?

Those who have lost their lives to such a fate are insisting that the shawdows of my mind are in haste


Like a faded star in the night I can still see the outline of your soul

The moon puts all to shame and is never left in pain

I shall mend with those who imprison me...Forever more I shall never have them as friends...


 "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi

© Copyright 2000 Dark Usagi - All Rights Reserved
StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
1 posted 2000-04-13 08:57 AM


wow this was so intense and sad  kinda took me and wouldnt let go well written

 Mystical being
which makes ink flow
Surround me in
your incandescent glow
Fill my brain with
thoughts and rhyme
As I try to capture
but a moment in time
~Shan~


sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
2 posted 2000-04-13 09:51 AM


This is a great poem...it got me thinking of the opinions I hold to certain things..
Very deep.
Good work.

sKiTtLeS~

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-13 05:57 PM


"Like a faded star in the night I can still see the outline of your soul"

As do I my friend, as do I.
Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-13 11:53 PM


Exposing snippets of the soul, I like that and I liked this!!  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2000-04-14 07:30 AM


very intense and meaningful for myself and I'm sure all. Very meaningful.

 Kathleen


kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
6 posted 2000-04-14 12:53 PM


i know how it feels to be trapped.  i hear a prisoner talking here, longing to be free.  keep your head up, they slip every now & then. then you can run. please post more!!!!!  it's so lovely to read.

*****kynder

~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

7 posted 2000-04-14 08:51 PM


Konnichiwa, Dark Usa-chan. Good luck admitting to yourself your true feelings.

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

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