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You I Will Miss |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Calling your name out, To the sky. I think aloud, And I wonder why. I wonder where, You were that day. When a cold heartless man, Turned me away. It couldn't have been you, I've been over this before. When you told me goodbye, my jaw hit the floor. Denial controls me, I can't deny this. It must've been you, And you I will miss. "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Short and to the point. I liked it. They do seem like strangers. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Wow great little poem, and just when you think you know someone... |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Thanks guys, we all know it's all about getting trough the pain of realization. sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes it is, my friend. . . and I hope that you have. . . excellent poem!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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