Dark Poetry #1 |
The words resound |
Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
The wall of sound travels around as your voice and meaning crowd All the space In my mind is all drowned come to me now I hear you still In colours shrill and all your heart that night untill Your words resound A wall of sound in my mind unabound And I am with you again Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Dear Mr. Poe... never ceasing to amaze me... and amazing me is a feat within itself! To me you have an unbelievable ability to put words together and make them into the most beautiful whispers there are..... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Another interesting way about it. Amazing. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walter, this is so very lovely... poetic perfection. I love seeing this side of your poetry. your shining in the darkness, as always. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is beautiful. Amazing flow. Kathleen |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
very cool,yes i liked this one.Thanks for sharing. |
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