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sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
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wisconsin, u.s.a.

0 posted 2000-04-13 09:37 AM



Would you like to play a game with me?
I'll give you my heart, but I'll keep the key.

No more chances this girl's taking.
The heart is too fragile to deal with such breaking.

The boys are the ones that like to play,
"You would if you loved me", they tend to say.

Poor little girl, confused and alone,
looking for love that she never has known.

She gives in to the boy, and he steals her heart.
Meanwhile she's thinking, they never will part.

Poor little girl, losing the game.
For she doesn't know the rules aren't the same.

The boy walks away, the girl starts to cry.
But her head she knows, she must hold high.

Never again will she let a boy win,
with love and trust ONLY, they will be let in.

Would you like to play a game with me?
I'll give you my heart, but I've lost the key.

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-04-13 12:38 PM


sKiTtLeS~ ohhhh, this is so good! I have one for you....along the same line.... I hope you like it


(I don't know who wrote the first part of this- it's in quotation marks-the rest is mine)

"When I saw him, I liked him,
When I liked him, I Loved him,
When I loved him, I let him,
When I let him, I lost him"

These words you see
they are so true
these words you read
they are for you

Please learn
from my mistake
make sure his 'love'
is real- not fake

Listen close,
and if he should say
if you love me
then it's ok

turn and run
take your heart away
don't be no guy's
roll in the hay!
-SEA-

I wrote that 11 years ago so go easy on me... it just seemed to go good with yours, although I like yours much better! -SEA

sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
2 posted 2000-04-13 01:38 PM


Thanks a lot, SEA.
I like your poem too!, and from reading it I can tell that you know exactly what I'm saying.

thanks again,
sKiTtLeS~

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-13 06:24 PM


Hey kid, that was grrrrrreaaaattttt.
God how it hit home for me, I've tried for two years to win a heart with honor, trust, and when I think I had it, she flew.
It just hit home. Thank you.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
4 posted 2000-04-13 09:46 PM


I'm glad you enjoyed this one, Joel.
You're welcome!

sKiTtLeS~

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