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AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2000-04-13 02:38 AM



Life after...

The gates of heaven open wide,
Behold beyond is paradise,
If you haven’t killed another being,
Then take your steps where all is calm,
Where on your touch the flowers blossom...
And up ahead lies the pond of memories,
Where often I shall glance to see...
You’re radiant smile and wondrous ways...
Just watch the reflections gently flow...
Till its time to stop my falling tears
Can’t fill the pond and erase the memory
Then gliding with the angel softly,
The joys of heaven are still waiting...
I’m taught the purpose of being here...
And this is life...after death...
I have new meaning, another day...
So I live on but will watch over you...
Safe within the gates the heaven
There is a life...life after death...


I always wonder what it would be like after death...
and in my heart I know i has to be beautiful...
I wonder what's in yours?
please feel free...
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 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao




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SEA
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1 posted 2000-04-13 12:52 PM


Avanti~ mine will be beautiful! I believe we are responsible for all we say,do and think.. I try to be careful, of course I've messed up more than I'd like to admit, but I don't believe in Hell, I just can't see a loving God doing something like that to His children, I think we have to come back and do it again until we get it right....... -SEA
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-13 06:07 PM


First off in a generation before some had to kill.
Will they never get to heaven?
I’ve often wondered about this.
Heaven? got there once, somewhere in Singapore.
A good thought although.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-04-13 08:03 PM


Where on your touch the flowers blossom...
And up ahead lies the pond of memories,
Where often I shall glance to see...
You’re radiant smile and wondrous ways...
Just watch the reflections gently flow...
Till its time to stop my falling tears
Can’t fill the pond and erase the memory
Then gliding with the angel softly,
The joys of heaven are still waiting...
I’m taught the purpose of being here...
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Avanti,
this is exquisite...truly beautiful...
and thought provking as well.

I believe that after life is of unconditional love and  all is forgiven in his eyes divine.
all who we love and all that we cherish is there...
after all...they dont call it HEAVEN for nothing
great work here....AGAIN!!!!!
thanks for the sweet Email
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
4 posted 2000-04-14 01:06 PM


Sea...that's true...god could'nt do that
Intreasting joel
and thanx janet
((((((hug))))))))

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-04-14 01:50 PM


so inspirational!!!  so sad that some souls are just lost, no matter what God or the devil does.  cheers me 2 c that yours is happy, much like mine at times.

*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.


AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
6 posted 2000-04-15 01:31 AM


thanx kynder

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
7 posted 2000-04-15 11:08 AM


I only hope it is as beautiful as you desccribe. If it is anything like my imagination potrays beauty and ecstasy to be than it could only be that.
An inspiring piece!

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
8 posted 2000-04-15 01:43 PM


thanx helenaj
i'm gald you liked it...and i feel good if it inspires antone...
see you around

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

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