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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp

0 posted 2000-04-12 11:00 PM



As I walked into the room
I knew something was a miss
she was lying there with eyes wide open
she wouldn’t rise again, lips touching wet kiss.

Lying upon her back with her mouth agape
striving for her last breath
looking on I felt like an ape.
Once friends all around
Seemingly picking at her bones.
True natures coming out
with little concern there backs are shown.

Her eyes glazed over,
went filmy like the dead
I watch her last breath escape
not a word was said.

All looked to me for what will come next,
I reach forward,
seemingly into the cold waters of death.

Lifting gently clutching her to my chest,
I carry her to the room we all know best,
with a silent prayer I slip her into the cool abyss,

As the toilet flushes I will surly miss this FISH.
HAHAHAHA....

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

© Copyright 2000 Joel. - All Rights Reserved
sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
1 posted 2000-04-12 11:17 PM


*Very* moving, Joel.
Hehe, you're better off without her, fish are bad kissers!

~sKiTtLeS~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-04-12 11:24 PM


I clicked so fast to reach this.
A grand fin-ali....

that was bad...sorry

 Kathleen


NamelessOne
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
3 posted 2000-04-13 01:29 AM


Hey you got as howl out of me with that one...hehe that was great.
dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

4 posted 2000-04-13 01:38 AM


*ROTFL*

Joel that was way too funny!  

*tries to howl..but a little grrrr comes out*

I tried*S*


Daniel


 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
5 posted 2000-04-13 02:47 AM






HEHEHEHEHEEH
YOU GOT ME THERE!!!

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2000-04-13 05:56 AM


Dear Joel
This was great and I really needed that laugh   I had a dreadful day at work and well that just made my day.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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