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SEA
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0 posted 2000-04-12 06:20 PM



Even though you told me
it was time for you to leave
my mind refuses
to understand or believe

Everyone keeps telling me
girl, you've got to move on
but I can't convince my heart
that you've really gone

You were my friend, my lover
the other half of my soul
I'll never find a way
to fill this empty hole

How will I ever be able
to hold anyone new
when my body still aches
to be touched by you.
-SEA-


This was an old one.... not a reflection of today  

© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
ShadowHeart
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1 posted 2000-04-12 06:23 PM


This was AWESOME!  I can now say that I can relate to this poem.  Great job!

<3 shadow


 Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength.


SEA
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2 posted 2000-04-12 06:30 PM


ShadowHeart~ thanks!   -SEA
Isis
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3 posted 2000-04-12 07:05 PM


Good work Sea!  Even if it is an oldie, the ache lessens in time as you know..  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



dhuron
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4 posted 2000-04-12 07:29 PM


Wonderful Post SEA.  Old but still great

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Joel the wolf
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5 posted 2000-04-12 08:20 PM


I know all to well these feelings.
I'm glad it's an old one.
But thank you for today.
Joel.

SEA
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6 posted 2000-04-12 10:20 PM


Isis~ thanks!

Dhuron~ thank you!  

Joel~ thank you!
-SEA

sKiTtLeS
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7 posted 2000-04-12 10:45 PM


Great poem!
Describes feelings that I believe everyone's gone through. It's nice when you can relate to other peoples work.

~sKiTtLeS~

NamelessOne
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8 posted 2000-04-13 01:38 AM


Great writing SEA ,i know where you`re coming from err came from and glad it`s behind you  
tracie66
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9 posted 2000-04-13 06:01 AM


Sea~
This was soo sad and brought back memories, hon it will take awhile but it does slowly get better.
HUGS
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


ESP
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10 posted 2004-12-01 03:56 PM


This brought tears to my eyes...you said it's old, not a reflection of your today: i am glad. For me it is exactly today. It hurts and this poem says it so beautifully.
*hug*,
Lizzie.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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