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~ It's Time~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Even though you told me it was time for you to leave my mind refuses to understand or believe Everyone keeps telling me girl, you've got to move on but I can't convince my heart that you've really gone You were my friend, my lover the other half of my soul I'll never find a way to fill this empty hole How will I ever be able to hold anyone new when my body still aches to be touched by you. -SEA- This was an old one.... not a reflection of today  |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
This was AWESOME! I can now say that I can relate to this poem. Great job! <3 shadow Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ShadowHeart~ thanks! -SEA |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Good work Sea! Even if it is an oldie, the ache lessens in time as you know..  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonderful Post SEA. Old but still great The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I know all to well these feelings. I'm glad it's an old one. But thank you for today. Joel. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Isis~ thanks! Dhuron~ thank you!  Joel~ thank you! -SEA |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Great poem! Describes feelings that I believe everyone's gone through. It's nice when you can relate to other peoples work. ~sKiTtLeS~ |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Great writing SEA ,i know where you`re coming from err came from and glad it`s behind you |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sea~ This was soo sad and brought back memories, hon it will take awhile but it does slowly get better. HUGS Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This brought tears to my eyes...you said it's old, not a reflection of your today: i am glad. For me it is exactly today. It hurts and this poem says it so beautifully. *hug*, Lizzie. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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