Dark Poetry #1 |
Loving You |
ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
When I tell you that I love you, you say, 'oh that's nice.' When I tell you I can't live without you, you say, 'oh that's nice.' When I asked you if you loved me you said, 'only as a friend.' When I asked you if you couldn't live without me you said, 'only as a friend.' Why is it that I give my heart To someone who won't give theirs? Why is it that I love someone Who barely even cares? Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing..and I know why I give my heart...James |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
Thanks! I know why I give my heart to...I was just questioning my judgement... Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
wonderful Poem Shadow, I have been in this situation before, how painful it truly is. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ShadowHeart~ it is such a fustrarting situation to be in.....my heart goes out to you.-SEA |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
It is the nature of our beast. I'm there now. love Joel. hahah see. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
thanks to everyone! you all have a way to lift my spirits. Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I understand the emotion and the pain only too well...I hope you can find peace soon... "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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