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Alicat
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0 posted 2000-04-12 06:57 AM


'I am a Vampyre!!'
"What? Pshah, right..."
'No, truly...I stay up all night long...'
"And?"
'I dress in somber clothing...'
"*snort* What else ya got?"
'I drink the blood of the living...'
"Sick, but a good source of iron..."
'Do you mock me, frail mortal?'
"You're whacked.."
'You shall pay for that, weak vessel..'
"Get bent, weirdo..."

And so ends another night at Denny's
Goths numerous as old pennies
Vampires without tack
Wearing only black
I think their minds are soft
A bunch of silly Goths


Alicat, the Persnikitty

© Copyright 2000 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-04-12 08:51 AM


For some reason this makes me laugh, I do hope that were the intention and if not I apoligize for my rudeness. Great poem all the same, thanks for sharing it.
Joel the wolf
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2 posted 2000-04-12 09:05 AM


There are like minds out there of this.
and they do drink.
I have met them.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-04-12 09:33 AM


I truly must be one as I work all night and sleep during the daylight
a-alibaster
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4 posted 2000-04-12 09:37 AM


There are those that are and those that wish...
I liked this and the way it is written even if I may not agree with it. It is an enjoyable read!

Munda
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5 posted 2000-04-12 09:51 AM


I hope you're not thinking of changing your name to "Alibat".   Found another way to disappear on me huh ? *GRIN* Hehehe
Liked this Al !  

Nicole
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6 posted 2000-04-12 10:39 AM


LOL@Alibat .... Good one Munda.  
Alastair, who let you out??  And how did you get to Denny's??  j/k  I have to say, guy, that your imagination rivals the most fertile.  Good to see you posting.

dhuron
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7 posted 2000-04-12 11:41 AM


*LOL*alibat also

A very good and creative post.  




 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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with you
8 posted 2000-04-12 01:05 PM


Alicat~ good grief you made me laugh, those kids look so silly and act worse, sorry -no offence meant, I'm just too old for that stuff, be who you are, those girls would be so pretty if they'd just wash that junk off their faces...... any way I  laughed hard at the reference to Denny's- too true, too true!-SEA
Poet deVine
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9 posted 2000-04-12 02:44 PM


LOL...wish I'd said this!!! Good poem sir!  
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10 posted 2000-04-12 04:52 PM


Dennys?. Isn't that where they serve wombat stew?? I went there once with my ghoulfriend.

Ali, your mind continues to work outside the realm of the known universe. I like that in a poet!!!  

Alicat
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11 posted 2000-04-12 07:14 PM


Bleah bleah...I'm evil..bleah..blurk..*cough*..ahem..yes..um..*cheesy grin*

Thanks guys for the humorous replies...and yeah, I was in a silly mood when I wrote this one...on the fly again.  Good thing I write small...now if only I could catch the little buggers buzzing 'round my dome and home.

Alicat the Persnikitty, who thinks bats are just mice on the wing.  





 As I sit here dimly thinking
Watching modem lights a-blinking
Churning out poetic hash.
Lord, in all Your piety,
Help me keep my sanity:
Please don't let the modem crash! --Alicat


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
12 posted 2000-04-13 12:47 PM


Alibat!!!

Another creative creation created creatively by the amazing Alicat!

You've always a unique perspective and presentation m'friend! No less so on this one!

Denise
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13 posted 2000-04-13 03:10 PM


Very creative, hehehehehe.....thinks bats are just mice on the wing.....well, they are, aren't they?!! LOL  

Denise

Michael
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14 posted 2000-04-14 05:35 AM


We need to go hunting one night my friend.  Excelllent poem... I'll meet you at Denny's


Michael

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15 posted 2000-04-16 06:37 AM


As soon as you sent this URL and I read this piece I knew that the guy that you were talking about was Andrew..  Yes, that is his name, and no he hasn't changed.  Let me tell you all something.  He is a wonderful person to know, but he thinks that he is truely a vampire. Strange, I know, but we let him have his fun. Scary, very scary.  Nice piece Cat Monster.  Thanks for the memories. Oh by the way, did we meet him at table five.  I'm sure that T-Rex was scaried too.. hehe.. one more thing, someone please explain wombat soup to me.  

Are you sure that the word that you were looking for wasn't vam pia'? lol.  I'm sure that you remember that one.. heheh..

Love,
Lady< !signature-->

 Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.



[This message has been edited by Ladycat (edited 04-16-2000).]

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