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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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Please forgive my absence, it was due to my comp getting a virus and having to buy a new one...I apologize! Who's Name Where do you lay your precious head for comfort? Mine rests in a purple satin bed, so cold. Where do your tears fall as you weep? Mine evaporate into nothing at all, dust and time. Whos hand will you hold as you gracefully grow old. Mine, as you reach deep into my grave gasping for your last breath. Whos name will you whisper... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Great writing. That was awesome. "Mine, as you reach deep into my grave gasping for your last breath. Whos name will you whisper..." I loved thosee lines, they had so much meaning... |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
nice to see you back a- this was wonderful, as your works usually are. so dark, and so sensual. there seems to be such soft anger in your words. |
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