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Michael
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0 posted 2000-04-09 08:44 PM


A CALL TO PEACE


I wander lost in the shadows,
There nothing left to say.
Never alone, ever alone,
I know no other way.

What is it that draws you to me,
What lies here I can't see?
I only wish to be lonely,
Please leave me to Misery.

I sing my song so quietly,
I offer no refrain.
Yet it seems your tears sing for me,
That I'm cause to your pain...

In sweet teases of love so true
I long to know and give.
I can't help but need the touch of you,
But ne'er does feeling live.

You cannot mother away pains
That live within this head.
So why must you rattle the chains
Of a child yet born dead?

These are not yours, these are not hers,
But my sins to atone.
Cringe the sky, heaven confers
They'll yet mark my headstone...

I have no cause, I take no heed,
To the many - to the few.
Save all applause, tonight I bleed
That love may be found true.

So smile should you look upon me,
In this, my sweet release.
Darkness be my Eternity,
This is my cry for peace.


Michael Anderson
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 For all behind was dark and drear,
And all before was night and fear.
How many hours of night or day
In those suspended pangs I lay,
I could not tell; I scarcely knew
If this were human breath I drew.

Lord Byron




[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 04-10-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-04-09 08:51 PM


Michael~ this is beautiful.-SEA
Isis
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2 posted 2000-04-09 08:52 PM


Michael *hugs* you know I'm here anytime..
You'll get through this it'll be hard, but you'll do it....

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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3 posted 2000-04-09 09:06 PM


"I wander lost in the shadows,
There nothing left to say.
Never alone, always alone,
I know no other way”

I’m surrounded by friends with no one to talk to, who would understand?
This statement is so true for me.
Thank you Michael.
Joel

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-04-09 09:41 PM


Okay.  No Applause.  But would you mind incredibly the European custom of snapping fingers?  (hard to do while typing...)  Love to you anyway.  Whether you like it or not.
(Serenity soft-shoes, exit, stage-right...)

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2000-04-09 10:02 PM


God bless you at this time...

 Kathleen


AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
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6 posted 2000-04-10 02:46 AM


Michael...
you know when repl to you...
i always wonder how to start...if i should go with saying how well you write or say Michael take care...but never mind the order...
i love what you write!
simply beautiful pieces...
all of look of peace of mind...and herts...
its such a wonderful theme...
you are amazing...you are a fine person...

Michael
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7 posted 2000-04-10 04:36 AM


Isis, thanks, my friend.  It's always nice to have people around who care.  

Joel, I am glad you can relate so well to that passage - well, actually I'm not    but it is nice to know I'm not the only one.

serenity, how could I help but love anything you offer me?  

Irish Rose, thank you.

Avanti, never matters what you say when you speak from the heart.  Thank you, my friend.


and thank each and all of you for the kind comments.


Michael

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

8 posted 2000-04-10 09:14 AM


I wander lost in the shadows,
There nothing left to say.
Never alone, ever alone,
I know no other way.

What is it that draws you to me,
What lies here I can't see?
I only wish to be lonely,
Please leave me to Misery.

I sing my song so quietly,
I offer no refrain.
Yet it seems your tears sing for me,
That I'm cause to your pain...

----------------
You cannot mother away pains
That live within this head.
So why must you rattle the chains
Of a child yet born dead?

These are not yours, these are not hers,
But my sins to atone.
Cringe the sky, heaven confers
They'll yet mark my headstone...
---------------

i read this late lastnight, but at the time could not to reply to it as it took my words.
i was hoping for them to return with the new days light...but i dont think they are all here yet... reading this one cuts deep...more so than any other one before i think...i just cant yet figure out why...or maybe i dont wanna know...
maybe you can help me(smile)
take care, please
jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

9 posted 2000-04-11 01:39 AM


thank you M,...im starting to understand...
i wont ever stop hoping for it to be different...nor will i ever accept completly giving up...but i do understand giving in...
and i do understand it is you who truly knows what is best for you.(smile)
prayers for peace...for all of us
with so much respect, jm< !signature-->

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon




[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-11-2000).]

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