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A Kiss Before Dying
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A Kiss Before Dying |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A Kiss Before Dying Waken “Child of Darkness” from the point of no return A soulless creature in Hell you forever burn Skin transparent pale winter white Seeks victims unsuspecting in the black of night Footprints soft and silent, never will they hear Powers from the crypt, it is you that they fear Warm flow of blood, thirst too lust Powerless to fight, relax in your touch Pounce the tiger with fangs of death Useless struggles to draw one last breath Feed upon mortals forever stay alive Thrill of the kill in this you thrive Offer the gift , or to let die Life’s red blood wine drunk till dry The master at work chills to the bone In misery’s moon never walk alone Creatures of darkness softly sighing Forever offer a last kiss before dying Marina Feb 18/2000 |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Being of the pack, I can see every move, very good, images very vivid. Loved it. Joel. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, I agree with Joel....very good and excellent images. Kind of makes you think. Loved it too. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The master at work chills to the bone.. In misery's moon never walk alone." My favorite part of this poem. James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, I can feel the power of your words on the page. . . this is indeed new for you isn't it? -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marina~ this is gripping, really a great poem!-SEA |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
wow - this carries that eerie essance all the way through it. Loved it. Very well done. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Loved the eerie feelings of helpness portrayed throughout this piece Marina, wonderful work!!  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Very Well Done Marina. Great Imagery in this. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thanks to everyone for your great compiments and replies! Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Footprints soft and silent, never will they hear Powers from the crypt, it is you that they fear --------------- ooh girl...now i gotta sleep with the light on  wow this is awesome...very cool poem very deep and perfect imagery. loved it take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thanks JM. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marina, here's lookin at you kid! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Oh sure Danny....now what did I do! Marina |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written... great work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
A strong flow, very, very vivid. Good job!!! Kathleen |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Such wonderful use of words here...so vivid.. I loved the eniter read! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Avanti,Kathleen ans Alibaster...thank you guys very much. Marina |
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