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Castle by the Sea |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
As the title beared, a lonely self same by the sea.. He looked in the mirror to find it was me... Fortune struck...beds aflame.. Hearts incrusted with crosses to blame.. Shallow souls bleeding once more.. The castle rests evermore... At last within his safe horizon calmness of empty space reveals... everything for what it should be.. not that which it is... A sliver of time, all which is alloted.. A shimmer of love on which he was besoted A shaft of anguish...possessing his mind.. a slice of his heart when they became parted... And all that was..he would again.. for tasting that time, and drinking that song.. gave his prespective in his soul.. and boundairies of his life.. He learned, and live, Loved and cried..often in the same night.. so he approached the castle by the Sea... and looked in to the waters to see... he saw it wasn't him ha the pain had wrecked... it was me... Edward A. Beerman |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your work never ceases to intrigue me, Edward. This was a most excellent piece. Loved the ending. Michael |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This is close to home. So many times I had loved and cried in the same night, And on the beach, of where I grew up. walking the shores. Thank you, Edward, for a Sunday morning experience when all are asleep. Joel. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Edward, This is a great piece!! Very thought provoking. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Edward, this was so moving!! It made me ache, for him, for you and for me..... Beautiful work  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
I love how you you started this one. I felt it build as it went, which kept my attention. It was a very interesting piece, which i look forward to more like it. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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