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He Sits and Waits
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He Sits and Waits |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
He sits and waits as the night closes in, for what he waits he is not sure. His fear is real, of what he's not certain, his life passed behind him like a blur. He wants to overcome this pain, the struggle is always too much. If only he could trust someone, to tell them, feel their gentle touch. But they will run, they always do, the pain is never eased. He can't seem to find the way to leave the misery behind. Oh, God, please... What will be his fate? In the end it's easier to sit and wait. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to Passions and the dark forum. I can clearly see you are gonna fit in here in the Dark!! Loved this, felt this way myself, but I've learned it's better to meet the fates head on than merely sit and wait..  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Welcome to passions~ A wonderful family, you will love it here. Great poem will watch out for more from you Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Achicade This sounds like me two years ago. loved it. Thanks. Joel... |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Welcome to Passions. Great First Post, and I agree with Isis. Meet your fate head on instead of waiting. Looking forward to more posts! dhuron The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
Thanks for all the wonderful comments. I appreciate your feedback. I've always loved to write poems..... God bless you all. :-) -debbie- |
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Caitlin Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 15 |
I really liked this. I've felt this way myself before and appreciate the way you expressed it. Welcome...we're the new kids together! |
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songwater Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 32Marietta,Ga. |
Debbie,that sounds hauntingly familer... ? |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
hauntingly familiar very much real life what we all go through it happens so often Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS... well done! it's sad and true... i'm thinking about youer end...and wondering...is it??? it is easier to sit and wait... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Achicade~ Welcome! Great poem! -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to the forum! You won't be alone here I can assure you! This was wonderful. Kathleen |
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