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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Through the darkness appears a cloaked figure. She floats in the air across the earth. Red eyes glow through the shadows of her hood. The demons inside control her every thought and feeling. Demonic voices never letting her soul rest. Her mouth drips with black blood. Her last feast of this earth for she knows it was her last. The souls of the lost enter her mouth and seeps down into her hate filled soul. For she can't take any more of this pain and emptiness. Weak she is but she still fights the demons inside. Her inner demons always winning. Never giving her a chance. Always fighting a losing battle of her demons. Messenger of fear in sight Dark deception kills the light ~Metallica~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh Hon I feel your pain, an endless outcry.. However, I do not believe you feed on the souls of others.. You are a sweetie carrying a heavy burden, it isn't your fault, you must remember that. I hoped a little venting would help. Do me a favour? Put yourself in a beautiful spot, eg. Beach, rainforest and write of a journey through there, you met a wise one and discussed your problems. Try to work through it all in verse. In the meantime... *HUGS* I'm here you know that!! Love and hugs hon  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
So much pain in a wonderful verse. Let your life have a change of heart. The world is too dark for society's youth. Keep that in mind. Not all hope is lost. Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Colorful writing...James |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
(((((hugz))))) intense and great as usual !!! Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Such Vivid Imagery*shivers* This was intense and wonderful.... The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
There is power in a darkend room, and the stillness sometimes is bliss. But to under stand it is better. A 5 howler for this one. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
reminds me of how I feel most of the time. Love the imagery.... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
D~A~ this is really sad......I feel like there could easily be a part 2 to this..... like a victory over her inner demons..... I'd like that for you. - SEA |
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