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Dark Poetry #1

For Sarah

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2000-04-08 01:32 PM

Here I am
But not really here
Breathin' listenin' seein'
Nothing more
And if it sometime...one time
Should make any sense
I know I could make it
Take it without breakin' apart

And you
I wait for you
You and you and you
Everything's you
Without you everything's gone
You're th' only thing
Holdin' me back
But since you've gone cold
I have t' let go

And in your mind
I was always fine
But try lookin' at me
There's no me left to see
You took it all
You ate me whole

Filled with hatred
I hate myself
So kiss me goodnight
A kiss o' faith
A tender touch
It's all I ask
T' feel heaven
Just one moment
Before I fall
Thru th' ground
For th' very last time

It's no surprise
I knew it'd come down t' this
But not this soon
It's too early
But yet too late

And now th' sun has set
Although it was always
Dimmed by clouds and tears
Always in a shade
Fightin' in th' dark
But now th' fight's over
My day in th' sun's over
It's over

But funny thing is
I'm not at all sad
It ended like this
'Cause there I were
But not really there
I was never really here

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-04-08 02:27 PM

Broken~ this is unbearably sad.... excellent writting-SEA

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-04-08 03:47 PM

Broken
I couldn’t tell you how many mornings I have laid awake searching the shadows
for my existence just like this, with the feeling of having fallen so deep
there was no more world, this brings back the feelings of old, and the remembrance
of my long road to recovery.
Thank you for sharing your inner.

)
Joel.

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