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Dark Poetry #1

Life Gone Wrong

demonic~angel
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 54
Kansas

0 posted 2000-04-08 01:16 PM

Feeling like a stranger in my own mind
anger violates my tongue
with burning words;
words coming from a dark place
of gossip and judgment;
words in a mind balancing on a razor blade
between divinity and damnation.
My soul feels lost amidst the black clouds
that pollute my tongue.
My thoughts, like the devil's little finger:
just a touch of evil, a plague touch
that feels like it could spread.
Utter terror rushes through me
with every thought of you.
I think of the life I knew, a life
with you and I think how it's
life gone wrong. I see the love in your eyes and I know:
This is Hell.
Life gone wrong.

Messenger of fear in sight
Dark deception kills the light
~Metallica~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-04-08 02:24 PM

D~A~ I liked this very much. Terribly sad though. -SEA

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-04-08 03:56 PM

D, A.
This is too close to home, very expressive, and so true on many occasions.
Very heart felt.
Joel.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-04-08 06:50 PM

Heart felt cries hon, I know, once again, wonderful work, you expressed so beautifully

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

4 posted 2000-04-12 10:56 AM

Wonderfully Expressed DA....

a piece from the heart...

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

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