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dhuron
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0 posted 2000-04-08 04:10 AM


Flashes before my eyes
Blinding flashes
countless number of flashes
What are they, am I crazy?

Muzzled voices
from afar, I hear them
Talking about me,
Why are they talking about me?

Binded, I can’t move
Flashes, more flashes
What is happening?
Who is doing this to me?

Blurred vision
In a room, alone
My hands, I can not move my hands
I am too weak to yell

Faint Voices, foot steps
They are coming closer
getting louder, so unbearably loud
Thrashing, trying to get free

It is the Doctor, Panic sets in
NO
The lights come on, I see
The rubber room
The Men in white suits
I feel the needle pierce my skin
as a slip away...


 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-04-08 02:21 PM


Dhuron~ This is soooooo creepy!! Wow, I liked it. -SEA
Joel the wolf
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2 posted 2000-04-08 04:20 PM


Dhuron

Been there done that, they stuck me with the same needle.
And your right that’s about all you can think of.
I also liked this.
Joel.

Isis
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3 posted 2000-04-08 08:06 PM


Creepy... yet a reality for some.  Well done  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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