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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-04-08 01:54 AM


~SILENCE~

Somewhere in the darkness
   there is a speck of light
         The light reflects hope, escape
              I'm awaiting the chance to take flight
                    I sit and wait for my chance
             and when I know the time is right
        I fly far away, like a bird
   and there I'll sit quietly
never again to be heard


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
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1 posted 2000-04-08 03:29 AM


There is always a speck of hope left, hopefully the time comes soon.



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


tracie66
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2 posted 2000-04-08 10:12 AM


~dhuron~
Thanks so much for your reply, this is my first post in The Dark.


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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3 posted 2000-04-08 06:23 PM


Look within kid, the light is there.
nice expression. with a longing, to move on.
little bird stay long enough to write some more.
Please.
Joel.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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4 posted 2000-04-08 06:48 PM


Yes Tracie, don't fly away never to be heard of again just yet!!  Besides we Aussies have to stick together!!    Lovely piece all melancholy..

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



SEA
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5 posted 2000-04-08 07:06 PM


tracie~ great poem! -SEA
tracie66
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6 posted 2000-04-08 11:39 PM


Joel~
Thanks I think I might just stick around  

Isis~
My friend I'm glad you liked it and I don't think I'll take flight just yet.

Sea~
Thanks sweetie  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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