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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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0 posted 2000-04-08 01:28 AM


Mystress of Sorrows

We, the lost, the loving
What have we to learn
Our fate is decided
Our souls are divided
We wither and we burn

What have we to conquer
Here in our domain
We search for the sunlight
The pale moonlit midnight
To ease away the pain

We will go on searching
Blindly we will grope
For brighter tomorrows
Our Mystress of Sorrows
Cannot extinguish hope

I was quite inspired by 'Last Time' by SorrowsMystress and wrote this just now. It is just the first draft, please help with revisions.



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1 posted 2000-04-08 02:14 PM


Ian~ I think this is very good! I really liked the feel of it!   -SEA
Joel the wolf
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2 posted 2000-04-08 04:58 PM


Very good,
we search out a light even in our darkest hour,
even for a pale moonlit on a dark midnight.
“Search for the light? nay it is inside”
Shirley:
Joel.

Isis
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3 posted 2000-04-08 06:44 PM


I think it's pretty damned fine as is  
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2000-04-09 05:47 PM


I think it's beautiful just as it is!

 Kathleen


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