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Mystress of Sorrows |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. 
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Mystress of Sorrows We, the lost, the loving What have we to learn Our fate is decided Our souls are divided We wither and we burn What have we to conquer Here in our domain We search for the sunlight The pale moonlit midnight To ease away the pain We will go on searching Blindly we will grope For brighter tomorrows Our Mystress of Sorrows Cannot extinguish hope I was quite inspired by 'Last Time' by SorrowsMystress and wrote this just now. It is just the first draft, please help with revisions. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ian~ I think this is very good! I really liked the feel of it!  -SEA |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Very good, we search out a light even in our darkest hour, even for a pale moonlit on a dark midnight. “Search for the light? nay it is inside” Shirley: Joel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I think it's pretty damned fine as is |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I think it's beautiful just as it is! Kathleen |
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