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The Burning Man |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Time again.. now it's time, begin, lost with man, within in us all.. Have to face, change of fates, At the top.. time to fall... in this grace, he has no face, that Burning man..lost in time, Now we fall, to the top.. Laughter to hard, to hard to stop.. carring the world again.. Caring for the Burning man Crown of thorns, path of Blood, knowing when the end will come. Weeping not for the weak.. Carry on, the wayward son, Rock shreding broken knee... Truth just so hard to see... laughing hard, too hard to stop... Without hope, Without face, that Burning man.. to hard to see.. First stab you, and I 'll stab me.. Knife in hand, Burning man, broken heart, shattered soul.. till it's time.. time to go.. Wrought in tears, cooled in flames... In the Burning man the Burning man.. Burning man.. we plant our blames... Edward A. Beerman [This message has been edited by For_Never (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
F_N~ this seems to be anger- a lot of it....I really like the way you wrote it.....-SEA |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Do a female version, burned alive on the stake for me too huh! Anger yes, confusion yes, fear yes, all too evident. Masterly piece my friend  < !signature-->There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) Thinking more about it, I'll do the female version!! LOL [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 04-07-2000).] |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Thanks, m'Ladies, but this is more about where we place blam.ot abou emotion.. EAB |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it stirred me.... Kathleen |
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