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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Letting Go |
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Night Chica Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 39Vermont |
Hello everyone. This is my first post so, be gentle...  Letting Go I like your warm smile; I crave your fond touch, And I love the way You hate me so much. The way your eyes sparkle; Your sweet, sultry lips Your harsh bitter words that Sting me like hits The way your arms hold me; How you tell me those lies Hollow words of "forever" Tears flow from my eyes. You brought me the pain, The sadness and grief I'd like to forget but My skin its beneath I know I should leave But I won't get far My body's been bound, My heart ripped and marred. Your grip over me, Is like one of death. 'Cause you won't let go Until my last breath. Is there no way out? My mind tells me no! Bye bittersweet love, This is me letting go. ~* Megs *~ I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived. -- Margaret Mitchell |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Megs~ first..... Welcome to Passions Its like our home away from home We are glad that you came to join us. Through our forums you may roam. The people here are so nice as you are sure to see. No matter how it is you feel you know where your passions family will be ok second.... Your poem was great and i'm glad to see that you are letting go.I know from experience that it is VERY hard. good luck  ~Angie Don't fear failure so much that you refuse to try new things. The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might have, and should have. --Louis Boone |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Passions. And very nice first post. I have been there and I know that letting go isnt easy. But once you get the nerve, life only gets better. As the saying goes, "Been there, done that and got the t-shirt!" Welcome Dark_kisses_Within I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Well walking away is the hardest part, but the rewards are worth the pain that it reaps. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Night Chica, I have broken many bones, in doing so I know they grow back stronger, Like the breaking of one’s heart, (mine) it has grown, I believe the key is flexibility If you remain ridged in the head wind the oak tree breaks, when the willow flows with the storm. Remain flexible kid, and grow. Joel. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Night Chica~ Welcome! Oh..... I have to say excellent poem!! I felt this way with my ex-husband. Letting go was the best thing I ever did. ( he was ABUSIVE) The opening lines felt like they came from my heart. Love it! - SEA |
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Night Chica Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 39Vermont |
Thank you everyone, for your kind words. I appreciate it all, and thank you for making me feel welcome. ~* Megs *~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Night Chica, what a lovely first piece, and there is no need to be gentle, you've done fine. A little secret, we are not harsh critics. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this and that is the way love seems to be so many times..bittersweet. James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
bittersweet love is better than no love at all, and you said it well... Kathleen |
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