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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
All my life I had a dream about what it would be like in 10 or 20 years down the road This is not at all what I envisioned I could ever end up in this position at this time, in this situation The vision that dwells within my mind is completely different than reality they are actually polar opposites My dream was colored by hope and happiness chose the bright shades that would paint the scenery I used to be filled with such promise he would be the one for me nothing could ever come between us We would share the most intimate moments I would tell him my hopes, my dreams, my fears and he would keep me safe There would only be days filled with laughter tender moments for us alone saying what we feel, celebrating our love Instead the dream has faded reality has tarnished the beautiful scenes blackness is everywhere -------------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Awesome poem, Lone wolf. I think maybe we all had (or have) this magickal vision of what our lives will be like "some day"... unfortunately, it just never seems to end up that way... sigh... but you never know, huh?  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
LoneWolf, We all have had dreams shattered. some more than others. It is so hard to move on after your dreams fade, but hope must remain to dream again. I hope you still have hope within, it will blossom soon.  The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
ya what they said lets just hope n wish and pray that someday all of our dreams will come true...hey its possible |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
You have done a great job of writing about the uncertainties that life has to offer. Theres no predicting what turn our lives will take and you have penned that idea so well with this verse. Nice work. ~~~thanks for the e-mail~~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing but somehow it appears you are living the wrong dream. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It's sad I had those similar dreams too, but no matter how we try we cannot make them a reality if they were not meant to be.. Great work!! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yet upon blackness may a pure white signature begin to write upon your life!!!! Kathleen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hope,tears,renewal....thank you, but I cannot give up on that dream just yet. You never know.... Daniel....I do have hope to dream again or is it still? I guess I want it with one who is not sure of me right now. Have to try. Thank you for the kind words. just_another_fe....all we have is hope. It is up to us what we do with it. Danny....thank you and you never know what will happen next I guess. You are welcome for the mail....thank you for the reply!! James....just can't believe it is wrong... Isis....I know in my heart it is meant to be and I will not give up until I have breathed my last. Irish Rose....thank you. How thoughtful and touching. I can only hope. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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