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Veil_Gypsy
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 44
Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail

0 posted 2000-04-01 01:24 PM


Get out of my garden I did not invite you here
Do not stay and rape this precios place in here
Who let you in here

I will not let you destroy my eden yet again
I will not let you corpot my world again
I will be the black widow in this tree again

Don't touch
I won't let you touch
Bleed if you wish to touch

I grow only evil here
Saddness lives in my garden and walks with maddness in here
They gayily pick prickly black roses in here


I'll chase you out of me with all rage
I'll engulf you in these emotion ..I will let you feel rage
I'll give you my anger and these emotions I will not longer care...the rage

I'll tempt you with the friut of life
I'll set my trap well ...you want to live for ever ...heres life
Is it really so you want to die....trade in your death wish for life


Come as I'll intangle you in my web
I'll harvest your tears to make this tree grow ..live well in this web
I'll coccon you in me in the womb that is my web

Get out of my garden
Leave this place I won't let you  in again
Shut up my gates....


 She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy

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just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
1 posted 2000-04-01 07:17 PM


I really don't know what to say. Good poem. Try putting some color in that garden  heres a red rose to start
~Angie
                                                          



[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 04-01-2000).]

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-04-01 11:18 PM


Wow. This is way powerful. I agree with just_another. Add a little color and let it thrive...



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
3 posted 2000-04-05 03:46 PM


wow! what can i say. very powerful, very angry. i enjoyed it.
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-04-06 10:53 PM


this touches my feelings tonight, because I know what it is like to close the gate.....and honor your growth

 
Kathleen

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