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Get out Of My Garden
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Get out Of My Garden |
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Veil_Gypsy Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail |
Get out of my garden I did not invite you here Do not stay and rape this precios place in here Who let you in here I will not let you destroy my eden yet again I will not let you corpot my world again I will be the black widow in this tree again Don't touch I won't let you touch Bleed if you wish to touch I grow only evil here Saddness lives in my garden and walks with maddness in here They gayily pick prickly black roses in here I'll chase you out of me with all rage I'll engulf you in these emotion ..I will let you feel rage I'll give you my anger and these emotions I will not longer care...the rage I'll tempt you with the friut of life I'll set my trap well ...you want to live for ever ...heres life Is it really so you want to die....trade in your death wish for life Come as I'll intangle you in my web I'll harvest your tears to make this tree grow ..live well in this web I'll coccon you in me in the womb that is my web Get out of my garden Leave this place I won't let you in again Shut up my gates.... She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
I really don't know what to say. Good poem. Try putting some color in that garden  heres a red rose to start ~Angie  [This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wow. This is way powerful. I agree with just_another. Add a little color and let it thrive... The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
wow! what can i say. very powerful, very angry. i enjoyed it. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this touches my feelings tonight, because I know what it is like to close the gate.....and honor your growth Kathleen |
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