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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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I Miss You In My Life |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Something's missing in my life, Maybe it's you, maybe it's you I need? No longer can I see that candle burning in the night, Feeling low, feelings of gloom descend on me. I look for your guiding light, It isn't there, Why won't you come to me? Oh God, it isn't fair. Endless hours just wanting to share with you, But I find myself alone, there is nothing I can do, Missing you so much, have things gone too far? I don't really care, for I love you wherever you are. I'm just a loser, clinging to feelings that aren't real, Hoping for a few moments of happiness to steal, Wishing to be held in the safety of your arms, Just to be with you and share in your sweet charms. But alas, I must be undeserving, Fortune never smiles on me, Seems all these things I am feeling, Are merely hopes and dreams........ There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sad but beautiful poem of longing isis... never stop believing in your self or your dreams... we all are due our turn...look for the light. take care, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, explicitly painful, Isis. Wrenching emotion this was... Loved it. Michael |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, you're not a loser. . . you are a wonderful person. . . and a wonderful friend. . . and your light is always there, even when you can't see it. . . Fortune will smile on you soon, my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Zunera Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30Pakistan |
This piece of work is simply remarkable Isis. I loved it. It seemed as if you had pulled out MY Own feelings that I was not able to express to whom I miss alot. God Bless you Isis. I feel relaxed now to find my thoughts narrated in the most beautiful manner. Thankyou. Isis, I'm also thankful to you for encouraging my pieces of work (I wish for you... , Driveway of Nowhere , etc.) Take Care, Zunera. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
I liked it ISIS... each of us yearns for something...someone... < !signature--> If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 04-04-2000).] |
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ZuMBLe Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33 |
That was very moving to me... I feel, is it God's joke to put the perfect one in front of us, then not let us have them? Sigh.. well written poem.. It makes me sad.. but I guess that only means it was very well written.. ZuM |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Isis, This one is pours sadness. You are deserving of everything and anything. Always remember that. Fate sometimes deals us bad hands, but in all truths it is for the best, perhaps a mark of a new begining. Don't give in, fight your way out of the pain and misery. Siempre, Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone, I'm touched that you all liked this, I thought it wouldn't go over well too soppy or something.. Thanks  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Touching to say the least...I have hope that hopes and dreams can become reality....Isis did you read my poem "Silk Lady" in open..I wonder what you think about it...James |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Not sloppy kid, just right to the heart. Painfully good. Joel. |
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Caitlin Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 15 |
thank you very much for this expression of yourself, truly deep and moving. everything happens for a reason, nothing happens by chance...everything will work out for you in the end. hope things are well  |
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