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Dark Poetry #1

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 1999-10-02 10:22 PM

Mourning sky
Turning black,
Filling with the smoke,
Of flesh.
Such a wasteful existance,
We live to serve
And soon I'll revolt,
Catching the sign
Of dying times,
Choking,
And pulling tight
The knot of deliverance,
As life is free,
To roam in other worlds.
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Umm...I couldn't make sense of this, but had to get rid of it anyway.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-10-02 10:29 PM

I take from it, a soul crying over the waste
of humanity...I wouldn't say you had to get rid of it...you've just merely passed it on for more of us to explore....

Jenny

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-10-24 11:46 AM

Sounds like revolt against the self to me.

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