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0 posted 2000-04-02 01:41 AM


Why must I let go of something I love so much, overtime?
Why does love play trick with me?
Why I cannot find love and be able to keep it?
To me, love treats me as a shadow, which it should escape from me
Do I not deserve love or deserved to be loved?
The tricks you play on me are not very nice,
you really did pierce my heart and crush my soul,
and make me lose the trust I once had in you,
I said I owe someone,
but I did not say I owe someone my love,
I cannot owe some one love, because I was not born with love,
when I found you, you ran away from me in the darkest deepest allies of my nightmares,
you fed on my hope,
you quench your thirst through my trust,
once you were satisfied, you left me there with nothing,
my soul was gone, so was my trust, so was my hope and so were you,
only dark memories left of you,
I can still see you feeding on my innocent little soul,
I see you laughing at me,
I know I am not the only one,
you have done this to so many,
I was another lost soul, who was looking for love,
You fooled me into believing you loved me,
I fell in your trapped and never found a way to escape,
You left me alone once you were done with me,
Leave me be,
let me live what is left of my life.



 Ronil (the one and lonely)

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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

1 posted 2000-04-02 01:56 AM


Powerful feelings here.  Yes you do deserve to be loved, just have to find the right person. Perhaps time will reveal all truths to you.


Best Wishes

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
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2 posted 2000-04-03 04:03 PM


Very powerful good job i know this same feeling to well and you say it perfect. If they would just leave us alone!!!!Good Luck
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