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Dark Poetry #1

Please read my poems

thebeautybrat
Member

since 2000-03-30

Posts 114
Florida

0 posted 2000-04-01 06:42 PM

Please read my poems
This I beg of you.
I want to know some opinions,
This is all you have to do.
You read the poems I have wrote,
Then select post reply.
No one right now is doing this
And I keep wondering why?
I've got some poems,
A total of three.
"This Is What Some Would Call Love" and
"The Only Place I Wanna Be"
I look at other people's poems
And post my replies,
Now please give that back to me,
And don't tell me lies.
Thank You.

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

1 posted 2000-04-01 06:55 PM

I agree.. if your going to post poems in here then post replys. There are a lot of poems in here right now with 0 replies.If you want replies for your poetry the reply to others.

I like how you put this in a poem, brat its cute

sports2girl
Junior Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 14

2 posted 2000-04-01 08:11 PM

very nice way of putting it. I agree totally with you!!

thebeautybrat
Member

since 2000-03-30

Posts 114
Florida

3 posted 2000-04-01 11:36 PM

Thanks for taking the time to read my poems and posting your comments!!! stop by my other poems too!! I also have some in Open Poetry #6 so stop by and see some poems by me!!! Thanks!!! ***LOVE***

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

4 posted 2000-04-02 01:22 PM

Alright! I think I will, you did say please!

Cute and well put together poem here, btw.

Joy

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 2000-04-02 08:03 PM

Beauty, it's the same old problem, it takes a while for people to start reading and responding to your work. I know I faced the same feelings when I started here. I thought everyone wzs ignoring me.
Just keep posting your work and responding to other's and they'll soon be responding!!

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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