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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
A friend so I thought In the light I see her demonic form A Hell Serpent mindless minion of her own selfish desire Why did I trust? Why do I set myself up? Can anyone tell me? Do your words have substance? Here I stand Open Wounded Abused Discarded Do your words have substance? She Betrayed my trust, stabbed a jagged dagger into my crimson stained soul, Relishing my agony. Tears for the Last time, Sadness replaced with anger She Demon!!! Karma shall deal your retribution as I will be your nemesis |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
WOW! those are some powerful, vengeful feelings!!! the harsh betrayal...vivid description of those feelings!!! wow!!!  |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
full of anger and vengence. i like that. well done. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Powerful poem dhuron. I like it.  |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Very powerful poem and full of anger.Its painful when we give someone our trust and the betray us. Good Job |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Go Daniel!! It is so painful when trusts are broken, feelings betrayed etc. Glad to see you are powering yourself. And yes indeed karma comes back eventually!! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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