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Chrystal
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since 2000-04-01
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0 posted 2000-04-01 04:42 PM


I knew you as Blondie, Bo and Shorty.
We had such great times together.
Why, then, are you gone?

I know where you are,
But no comfort comes from it.
How did this happen?

There were so many doctors and specialists.
They still couldn't prevent this.
Why?

You slipped quietly away,
Without a trace of our friendship and sisterhood.
I didn't even get to say goodbye.

While you suffered in your last days,
I was away, having fun and making new friends.
I'm so sorry.

I wish I could have been there for you,
But I wasn't.
Why am I so guilty?

Things are different now here on earth.
Rare smiles, and floods of tears.
Where are you when I need you?

Cards and flowers,
They have overtaken our house.
I hate all of them and what they stand for.

Photos of you are everywhere,
But I can't remember you.
Is this normal?

You were my best friend and only sibling.
You're gone, and I'm left to pick up the pieces.
God, why did you take her?

I don't know how to say goodbye.
It's gonna be really rough for a while.
Can I make it through?

I wish you were here,
But I can't change the plans of God.
So with great difficulty I say...

Goodbye, Bo.



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Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
1 posted 2000-04-01 06:36 PM



What pain and sadness. I'm sorry for your loss, I hope you'll get through it. Hug to you. Yours truly ~Broken

 I bleed my feelings on a white sheet
I color the blank page red
It leaves me blodless
Pallid and stale
While the crimson pain thunder in my head
~Broken~

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
2 posted 2000-04-01 07:09 PM


Great poem. I'm very sorry for your loss ((hugz)) This poem made my skin tingle. Best Wishes to you ~Angie

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-01 11:10 PM


A poem that filled me with sadness. I am truly sorry.  Things happen for a reason, but I don't see the reason for this loss.

Be well

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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