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A Blaze |
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Veil_Gypsy Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail |
Blazed I'm your vision and your end Today you can't hold me back Take the dager of truth stab this unbeating heart I have no more need for emotion you have taught me well Yes I'm the ugly things pushes aside I'm the truth in you I have taken the bitter friuts And have cultavaied the unholy My fruitsges are...not of kindness or of faith There the demons in you My tree is rotton as am I My words are like the barrned ground Come take come taste me I'm the demons in you Struggle with me this is all well and said.... She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy |
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sports2girl Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 14 |
good poem, i hope to see more of your writngs. you get right to the spot |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Veil, ~ And have cultavaied the unholy My fruitsges are...not of kindness or of faith There the demons in you My tree is rotton as am I My words are like the barrned ground Come take come taste me I'm the demons in you ~~~~ I love it....demons within you almost like I'm your torture...truly great job The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very intresting theme...demons in you... really liked it a lot... good work! If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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