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What evil lurks in you...?
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What evil lurks in you...? |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
What evil lurks in you? < !signature-->With passing time the picture gets clearer... The times we shared all seems to have vanished... The whispers lied...the words still more... Tears turned meals...with pain a dessert... What evil lurks in you...? I cannot tell... The eyes are deep and the meaning so superficial... The fragrance could put a flower to shame... The smile you flashed...it blinded me... So surely you could pave you paths... Does evil lurk in you...? I could not see... The nights passed choosing thoughts... The days waited to hear a call... The curtain falls...is your act over? Does evil lurk in you...? I might have just caught a glimpse... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark... from which such truth evolves...from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 04-03-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The eyes are deep and the meaning so superficial... The fragrance could put a flower to shame... The smile you flashed...it blinded me... So surely you could pave you paths... Does evil lurk in you...? I could not see... --------------------- AVANTI!!!!!!!! this poem is AWESOME!!!!!! WOW!!!!! your words have been kicking some serious butt here latley!!!  this is excellent and very well written. the last line is perfection. way cool poem here. take care, jm she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough, and I'm a little bit rusty, and I feel like my head is caving in. ...and I dont know if I've ever been really loved by a hand thats touched me... and I feel like somethings gonna give... and I'm a little bit angry. matchbox20 |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
very well done indeed. i enjoyed the read very much. |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Great poem, very moving. I really liked it. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Thanx janet...i'm glad you liked it... it feels good comming from you... thanx danni and hope,tears and renewal.. glad you enjoyed If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great poem Avanti. I love it !  Hope you're feeling better today. (((((HUGS))))) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I think you did indeed see the evil lurking within him. Hope you are feeling better about it now...  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Yes well the evil one does come in many fine shapes and forms  Loved your poem Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Intriguing pice, AVANTI. Me thinks there's an evil in us all as well as a good.. we only have to choose which we let prevail. There is much power both on the surface and beneath these words, excellent poem. Michael |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
I'm better Munda...(((((hugs))))))) you liked it...me's  and well ya Isis...like i said...I think I caught this glimpse...I'm fine...thanx for asking ISIS...how 's your son? Traciee66...Hi...true evil has it's forms... Michael... it's true all of us may have a good and bad side...but we must allow the good to supersceed...else I feel that when eveil will lurk...glad you liked the work...! see you'll around... thank you for replying... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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