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Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74


0 posted 2000-03-31 02:53 PM


No one hears the ones who cry.
Covered up by countless lies.
All alone they wonder why
No one hears the ones who cry.

No one sees the ones who dream.
Things aren't always what they seem,
The mindless ones are the ones who deem
That no one should see the ones who dream.

No one sees the ones who fear.
The ones who shed not a single tear,
The ones who crave the light to be near...
No one sees the ones who fear.

We're all so blind, we humans are.
And deaf we all are too.
And all this leaves an awful scar.
On those who havn't a clue.

© Copyright 2000 Hope, tears, and renewal - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-03-31 04:16 PM


That was AWESOME!  There is so much passion to that, and I completely understand where you're coming from.  Thank you soo much for posting this!
Hope,
Alicia

Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-03-31 04:45 PM


There is so much truth in what you say...there are so many deaf and blind people out there its sad.
Loved your poem!


**HUG**
take care
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


Broken
Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
3 posted 2000-03-31 04:48 PM



We're all so blind, we humans are.
And deaf we all are too.
And all this leaves an awful scar.
On those who havn't a clue.
******
Great poem, and it's all so true. Loved the last stanza, it really moved me. Take care ~Broken  


 I bleed my feelings on a white sheet
I color the blank page red
It leaves me blodless
Pallid and stale
While the crimson pain thunder in my head
~Broken~

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-03-31 05:20 PM


Too many people blind and deaf.  Can't hear the plees and can't see those who need to be noticed the most.  Good job!

Joy

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
5 posted 2000-04-03 03:59 PM


This is great Hope. I love it  
ShadowHeart
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

6 posted 2000-04-03 06:59 PM


GREAT job!!  I liked this because it totally describes the human race in all truth...we need truth in this world.  Hope ya feel better!

~shadow


 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

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