Dark Poetry #1 |
Deaf and blind |
Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
No one hears the ones who cry. Covered up by countless lies. All alone they wonder why No one hears the ones who cry. No one sees the ones who dream. Things aren't always what they seem, The mindless ones are the ones who deem That no one should see the ones who dream. No one sees the ones who fear. The ones who shed not a single tear, The ones who crave the light to be near... No one sees the ones who fear. We're all so blind, we humans are. And deaf we all are too. And all this leaves an awful scar. On those who havn't a clue. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
That was AWESOME! There is so much passion to that, and I completely understand where you're coming from. Thank you soo much for posting this! Hope, Alicia |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
There is so much truth in what you say...there are so many deaf and blind people out there its sad. Loved your poem! **HUG** take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
We're all so blind, we humans are. And deaf we all are too. And all this leaves an awful scar. On those who havn't a clue. ****** Great poem, and it's all so true. Loved the last stanza, it really moved me. Take care ~Broken I bleed my feelings on a white sheet I color the blank page red It leaves me blodless Pallid and stale While the crimson pain thunder in my head ~Broken~ |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Too many people blind and deaf. Can't hear the plees and can't see those who need to be noticed the most. Good job! Joy |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
This is great Hope. I love it |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
GREAT job!! I liked this because it totally describes the human race in all truth...we need truth in this world. Hope ya feel better! ~shadow Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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